Warning: I am the absolute worst drawer in the whole world. It’s a wonder how I ever got into this school, let alone passed drawing class. But I did my best to sketch out what the images are going to look like, and I added some labels for the real difficult ones.
Fun interpretations of the assignment! Don’t knock your drawings (they communicated just fine). For future drawings, you could produce Orthographic Drawings (top-down, telling the viewer where everything is–like a map).
My only critique would be to watch the screen placement of the model–for most of the shots, she is center (until we get to black and white). Either keep her centered or add context to her placement (does she travel slightly from frame right to frame left, wide shot into close-up, etc.).
Kudos on working a trip to Jeni’s into your project!